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Tuesday, February 3, 2015

frosty stars

a silent peace
 muffled, gathering...

   downy snowflakes
                      all around

they come to rest one by one
 on the doe's long lashes, above her liquid eye
her breath like a cloud, still - yet swirling
 up to the stars to join the crystal frosts above

a little scribble in the margins of Winterkiln


4 comments:

  1. Beautiful! I love the way you structured it.

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  2. That was so beautiful!

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  3. Gorgeous! ^_^ You have a way with words, darlin'! I love snow and stars... <3

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  4. So pretty and winter-y <3

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